Oh my god
great ending
Oh my god
great ending
harry potter eat your heart out
Loved it.. great animation and character design.Funny jokes good voice acting.. four months well spent. my only complaint and it's just a style thing,cause your 'toon is so pro.... why use that crappy brush tool to do your contour lines... you can work the lines a little more and get some clean line quality. I know everybody has kinda settled on this flash style line work..and it's popular...but I dunno... to me.. it's a little rough.anyways congratulations on an outstanding achievement.
one of the best flash toons i've ever seen
Great story,very unique and multi-layered. awesome voice talent and great character animation.... I love that you made Brett Farve one of the candidates for hottest game chick.
ha-ha funny
I particularly liked your wiggley line style,great character design and really snappy.
pee pee
very good ...lots of work..congratulations..great character design..good script...great voice talent..good color concept. On the negative side I found the the rack focus affect where you zoom and scale on the characters to be over used ..also you should try to key frame some of your animation rather than always rely on the automatic tweening function in flash..it gives this kind of floating effect that i hate.. I wouldn't even bring up these issues except for the fact that you worked so hard on your toon and you obviously want to improve..so good luck to you with your career in animation
YOu know what, I was getting a feeling I was overusing the zoom a little bit. I'm gonna cut back in my next one. And yes, I'm going back to doing a lot more fbf... it's just more professional. Great suggestions, glad you enjoyed it!
phoney baloney
I think its great...
really really reel
I think it's great but if you wanna use this reel to get jobs.you have to specify what it is that you demonstrating ..is it the animation or is it the character design..I get the feeling that it's a hybrid of both ...If you wanna do animation you gotta make a demo reel that shows stuff like weght distribution,walk and run cycles..boring shit like that.
enlightening
Finally somebody has made it all clear to me...Darwin has got nothing on you.great character design...the only thing I would change is the way you did the eyes with that oval tool...It doesn't go well with the rest of your line quality
complete carnage
Great pose to pose animation....really pro...awesome premise ..great character design...You couldnt do much better.
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