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Age/Gender: 41, Male
Location: Montreal,Can
Job: artist
ain't no thing but a chicken wing
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very good ...lots of work..congratulations..great character design..good script...great voice talent..good color concept. On the negative side I found the the rack focus affect where you zoom and scale on the characters to be over used ..also you should try to key frame some of your animation rather than always rely on the automatic tweening function in flash..it gives this kind of floating effect that i hate.. I wouldn't even bring up these issues except for the fact that you worked so hard on your toon and you obviously want to improve..so good luck to you with your career in animation
Author's Response:
YOu know what, I was getting a feeling I was overusing the zoom a little bit. I'm gonna cut back in my next one. And yes, I'm going back to doing a lot more fbf... it's just more professional. Great suggestions, glad you enjoyed it!
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I think its great...
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I think it's great but if you wanna use this reel to get jobs.you have to specify what it is that you demonstrating ..is it the animation or is it the character design..I get the feeling that it's a hybrid of both ...If you wanna do animation you gotta make a demo reel that shows stuff like weght distribution,walk and run cycles..boring shit like that.
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Finally somebody has made it all clear to me...Darwin has got nothing on you.great character design...the only thing I would change is the way you did the eyes with that oval tool...It doesn't go well with the rest of your line quality
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Great pose to pose animation....really pro...awesome premise ..great character design...You couldnt do much better.
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brilliant just like the real thing
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truly horrifying...let that be a lesson to all you kids out there..Hell is no laughing matter....mind your pees and ques of you will find yourself in a room full of asses
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I loved it great n,p,c. awseome enviroments....brilliant
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yeah this is truly one of the great web cartoons of our time....as you watch it remember where you are because you will tell your grand children about it.great character design.great animation,and great story...does not get much better .
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I guess it never really ends...luckily a very catchy tune
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